 Risu-Rizu 11/30/03 . chapter 1I'm not quite sure what I just read in the grand scheme of things (I haven't read "Children of the Heart" yet), though I am quite sure that I liked what I saw. The ending is rather ambiguous, and I was very lost in the conversation between Ranma and Tofu-sensei, though that doesn't seem to bother me much. I do know that I just read a really good fic, however, and that somehow, you were able to hold onto the tongue-in-cheek humor of the series while keeping it mildly serious at the same time-not a small feat. You've got a great flow of writing. Keep up the excellent work. |