Not horrible

This was pretty good. I think you should continue it. Update soon.

Your story has a very good plot and all that if they were to make that an episode..well that would've been cool

please add more Ukiya x Ruri please...

I like them so much!

I have a crush on Ukiya! ü

10/10

an ok story...but pleez create more shun x rurripe(oops! ruriko) parts ... (and ask the person who said shun x ruri parts are inevitable to shut up...these parts are the ones that are attracting more ppl ta see ur fanfic...)

The suspense, this is so cool! Eventually they could realize that evil Reiji-chan is there! (I think). What's next? Hooray for Q-taicho!

hmm this is an odd story but I kind of like it please write more!

Ooh, do continue! And putting Fei and Megane together was cute. Great work!

Being the guy who requested for to put up the Gatekeepers Section, you may be receiving an ELITE REVIEW... good start, substancial for a first chapter... then ending in a cliff hanger... very good...

For future chapters, multiple intances would be good... means each couple should have their own story within the main fic...

Waii ! So cute. I like all the pairings here too. Hmm... pls continue ! I really like Kageyama... no one ever writes fics with him in it... continue !

Hey! Another first-gatekeeper fic writer! Omedeto! I'm actually one myself...and it's still not finished...and I'm pleased to say that you did quite well on your first try. Continue it or make a new one!

A very interesting story! Characterization is good, and it flows quite well...it tells enough of the background for non-viewers without overwhelming the new fans with too much detail. Putting Fei and Megane-kun together was nice.(I'm pretty partial to Shirei and Ochiai myself, but that will be another story, I suppose.
Good work!