oh that was great fun, dirty and hot i love M rated lemon stories great work

I absolutely loved this. But sometimes, it was confusing as to whether or not Bella was a vampire yet or not. But really, amazing job. :)

ohh i likey ! ;)
are they both vampires? or is bella human ?
=S

Love it!

I loved every word of it... Now that's god! use of a private beach... See u next fic!

one word: amazing!

"A private beach with a fence and a small hut with a mosquito net wrapped neatly around it, flowing softly in the wind; and though I was in shock, I couldn’t help but notice its beauty." Sounds wonderful!

"I watched the lean muscles of his back move and stretch beneath his skin and the diamonds which were embedded there." F'ukhott Edward!! Sigh!

Lovely lemon, liked Bella's POV...her hesitancy and then the unhibitied feelings when Edward had her in his arms. Sweet!

(I am not sure even in S. OR the water is ever warm!) LOL

Thank you!!

Loved it!

I loved it!

But I'm SO confused! Is she human or vampire?

totally sexy and awsome great job for first story on beach.

That, my dear, was amazing. I loved every minute of it and the sex scene was perfect! You captured me.

~HeartOfRaven~

cute! i loved it!

Wow.
That was the weirdest lemon I've ever read.
(In a good way)
It was sexy yet still Edward and Bella.
And just adfjsdlkfjads! It was yummy (:

Hahah my little siter kept walking in my room.
I was like adlfjsldkfj "WHAT?!"
lol

AWESOME!

Luved it! Hey r I going 2 finish or comtinue American ganster also? Please I really really liked that story! ;-D