I liked it to begin with... There is no Thanksgiving Break in Scotland/Britain/England..

love it please keep updating

Awesome story! Please continue :)

pls. Keep on continuing this story. I really like it. It's different from other veela stories. Update soon.

it's a very good story

I'm looking forward to the next chapters

I just can't simply get enough of this wonderful story! It bought me to the edge of my seat in the beginning when Hermione 'supposedly' had two mates. Thankfully, chapter 14 clear everything. It definately had me worry when Hermione accepted Draco as her mate, but was clinging on to Jason. Whew gladly that was clear out! It also have me enjoy reading about ur OC Jason...even though I was rooting for Draco. I fell in love with the Romance, Drama, the lovely fluff in between and of course a bit of angst you simply blend perfectly in your story. I really enjoy reading this fic...it just FANTASTIC! I can't wait for the next chapter...keep the wonderful writing flowing! :)

Yay now Hermione is all Draco's! I love this story and I'm glad I found it. I read it all today. :)

Awww Hermione's in love with Draco! How cute! And Jason with Emily, perfect! (: update!

i just wanted to say this story is breath-taking. i absolutley adored it and it seems that u put a ton of effort into it to plan out that way so main thing to say is that i loved ur story so keep writing always.

iw Arya Ivy Willow

please, please, please, write more! i love this story so much, i think my world might end if you didn't. really, i love the way you phrase things, and you really captivate your audience with your words. this may be the best dramione i have ever read, and i've read several hundred. you have a true talent. keep going.

love,

Lily

I have found /many/ grammar mistakes (including punctuation,spelling, grammar, and a lot more...) The plot is a little unbelievable (in the tense "this would never happen") and I get occasionally bored when I read it. I honestly think you need a thesaurus (and have thought this multiple times when seeing the same word five times in a paragraph) But the story is fine and it's slightly interesting. It's not exactly interesting but with a little work it would be a masterpiece. Perhaps a beta reader and a little light thinking would do the trick.

i love it!

update soon please!

-Luna Carter

Please choose Malfoy over West! If Jason was even a Veela then choose Malfoy!

Never The Less, A Fan

Hermione? A Veela? Please be true!

Never The Less, A Fan

First of all, another boy? Unoriginal. But, it depends on the author to make it unique! So make it unique!

Second, I also notice other people's eye colors. Mostly a shade of brown. That just means she's observant and brave to have eye contact.

Never The Less, A Fan