I never expected to find any sort of fic like this in the xHOLIC section, considering it just seems like a difficult thing to write in a way that would do justice to the characters. However, you've managed to do it very well. It's a new look at Himawari, it's not Doumeki/Watanuki, and it's caught my attention, and therefore it is original.

I thank you for that.

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Uwaah, I really liked that! XD Just, the overall emotion and atmosphere fit really really well. This was a good read! Good job! ^_^

I can't say I... quite understand this story. But I stille njoyed it very much nonetheless. I've always been a big fan of the Zashiki x Watanuki pairing.

Just wanted to show my appreciation
lots of love and luck,
aixyutin

I very much enjoyed that. :33
You should add a new chapter.

Your use of Oyabu is correct in my understanding of it. There may be some more to it (generation-head titles or something) but it fits.

Pretty sad/cute/melancholic. If you wrote more on perhaps later-on events in this life you'd have a very happy reader...

Good fic! As usual, you manage to pull off writing each character as they are in canon. Your theory on Himawari is one I know I could have never thought of. Keep up the good work!