i hope you continue this storie its intresting.

Wow, I liked this so <3 This is definitely the most promising kh fic I have stumbled upon for a while.

Very interesting. I'm curious to see where this will go...

I'm really, completely in love with this story so far. Well-written AUs are hard to come by, and I'm excited with how the characters seem to be developing so far, particularly Riku. I'm looking forward to more chapters in the future!

This has got to be one of the most awesomely unique stories that I've read in a while. I enjoyed the way you tell the story, in first person, but staying in character and not abuse your writing power to make it a roleplay, rather than a fanfiction. I also enjoyed the sequencing of the first chapter so far. It's complex and covers a broad spectrum of topics, but you pulled it off as an easy to read, and enthralling first chapter.

I love what I see so far, and I hope that there is more to follow/ Thank you for posting!

This set up looks to bring some very interesting things. I can't wait to see where you are going with this! I am very much looking forward to more!

Wow!! This is a really cool story so far. I can't wait to see how you continue it. ^_^

Interesting. Can't wait for the next update!

I love you <3

Brunette spikes/Blue eyes + Sweet demeanor = Sora

Cloud + Aerith = Sora

Is Cloud Sora's dad?!

Awesome! Awesomeawesomeawesome!

Are you going to continue it? :D

<3 *is in love*

You know, one of these days, I really need to reclaim my Kingdom Hearts game from my kids. They absconded with it a couple days after I bought it and I never saw it again. Then, of course, there's the need to play FFVI and FX... A vacation with my PS2 is sounding like a good idea. heh.

This was cool, funny, sweet and intriguing by turns. I like how you've drawn all your broody characters. They're all depressed/depressing but in their own unique way.

I know I'll be reading the next chapter.

Sque! This is adorable, and dark and sweet and amazing. Not only does it have my favorite pairings it's got that deep connection to the theme and the characters that makes have the potential to be a truly unique and great story.

I can't wait for the next chapter!
Lots of cuddles,
Rambles

aw that was so cute
i that hope you eplain more on how
riku and sora became boyfrieends
great job