Update! And that kiss better be Bakura and Malik >,.,>!..Pweaty please? I absolutely adore this fic. So update ASAP...like now!...Please...

oh thank you for updating, a nice christmas present!!
I really loved it, especially the scenes with tristan and bakura heheh! probably my fav chapter to date!
Am wishing you all the best for the new year.

Gah, this is so epic. So, so epic. Such tense atmospheres and frustrations. Angsty! Love it.

Ouch. Bleeding from the mouth is never a good sign. I hope Bakura didn't receive too many internal injuries.

Yup, I can definately see Bakura getting wasted.

I loved the chapter, and I hope you and yours have a great new year as well. After all, it can only get better from here.

-your friend, eggy

Oh, you are such a meanie for cutting out the kiss between Tristan and Duke! >.< :P
No, but you're nevertheless mean ._.

I really liked that chapter. It was funny but at the same time thrilling. I don't like Tristan normally. He's just... superfluous. But in this chapter he was really funny, also Bakura was cute, eating like there's no tomorrow^^ And he was eating froot loops? I love this stuff, my addiction *_*

Oh gosh, Yami no Malik has access to the Millennium Puzzle? That's not good :/
I love Malik and Bakuras growing bond. They are so cute together <3

Oh and I really like the triangle between Serenity/Duke/Tristan. But I'm glad that Serenity and Duke kissed, I like it better than Serenity/Tristan. I admittedly like Tristan/Duke the most but hush :o

yes!! i love it when people get all ** and try to take it out on Bakuras total non ** off-ness!! XD
tho no one should call him weak, cuz who KNOWS what will happen then >3 *snicker*snicker*
PLEASE update soon!! This fic is WAY too good to wait another 3 or 5 months for D8>

Oh yay drama. I like. And I'm so glad you don't have anyone called by petnames, like "Kura" or whatever *gag* So now Dark Marik can get into Yami's soul the same way? Crepy! That'll make things pretty intense.

Sorry to hear about what's going on in your family, take as much of a break as you want... Don't let us pressure you into writing if you don't feel like it.

I really love the way that you write. You manage to keep things so serious at times and so light and airy at others.
Because, oh my goodness, I found it hilarious that everyone was so ready to blame Bakura for all for everything when it was really Serenity and Duke and Tristan who had the problem.
And the part where Bakura still "managed to look dangerous with a box of colourful breakfast hoops wedged under his arm," was priceless.
And I really like how you do your best to include all of the characters. I've read so many stories where people just focus on Marik/Bakura/Yugi and just sort of toss everyone else to the side. But you seem to care about everyone. And Tristan was utterly hilarious in this. And I simply couldn't keep myself from smiling when Bakura was thinking about kissing. And Marik. It was too adorable.
And I'm glad that Odion is getting better. It puts Marik in a good mood, which put Bakura in a good mood, which puts pretty much everyone in a semi-good mood.
The Pharaoh and Bakura being their supervision for alcohol consumption, oh my. How many times am I going to use the word "hilarious" in this review?
But poorpoorpoor Yugi. And poor Yami. I can only imagine how awful he feels for putting Yugi at risk like this. Poor things indeed.
Great job! (: Overall, I loved it.

argh please continue this, I'm dying for an update!! it's really well written, I commend you!

omg no! I hit the end!! Please write more, my friend and I are eagerly reading this instead of studying for finals, ha!

I think you're doing a good job keeping everyone in character... except I don't feel like Bakura would admit he had a soft spot if his life depended on it... so I feel like scenes where he is actually showing he cares seem kinda... corny... and ooc. But the scene were I and Marik were fighting was really good, Bakura so would pull the knife trick and all at him. Despite just being angst, it was good angst xD because of Bakura's very... nature.. I think realistically this friendship/relationship would continually get more unstable, even dangerous, cause even if Bakura DOES care, he doesn't really ... know exactly sane ways of dealing with things so I would imagine more parts of him snapping dangerously like that.

I'm just crossing my fingers that this won't turn into some corny/mushy... naruto-redeems-the-villian sort of story... cause it has so much potential to be awesome with Bakura flipping out and being tempted by dark stuff and making mistakes.

But good job so far, please please write more! I see it's been over a month since you updated, please don't abandon it ;_;

Trust me being late to this chapter...
Yeah I really loved it, especially the hug at the end. Probably even more than the scene in the arcade. Ain't that weird? I think you describe things extremely well, to the point i can really see it happening before me. pretty amazing.
please update soon! <3

^^ firstly, sorry for the entirely too short review from earlier, i was on the family laptop at home and that’s just a terrible place to make a coherent sentence let alone a whole string of them especially since it’s located at the apex of the hall/den/dining/living/kitchen –room place which tends to be a poor place for solitude….eh anyway getting on to the review, you had Yami Bakura so ooc it was almost painful but you executed it so beautifully that anything else would be an insult(my barbed compliment for the day). The reference to the god cards however was a little rough(about where Bakura touched him it seemed as though you kinda took a surgeon’s approach and just sewed on the nearest ‘like’ thing… it fits but not so perfectly) though you did mention it so i guess that my comment is less criticism than complaint. Other than that it was lovely, the part with the toy rabbit was a particularly nice bit, it showed that even though Yami Bakura tries to be sweet the subtle nuances of decorum are lost on him, that and it’s less blunt than simply stating every few paragraphs that he is an unnatural and distinctly un-human creature and so understands nothing of humanity(though sometimes an firm declaration is better than a subtle hint ^^) so good job on that. Also i liked the almost ‘kiss’ scene, it was very well written(so well i could actually see it in my head which says something since i had two little girls running about right in front of me chatting away and being annoying)


all in all you are doing a terrific job^^ feel free to ask for fanart(though be warned it isn’t very good as you will have noticed ) and if i can find a good pose i’m /going/ to draw Bakura the ‘TV Repair Demon’ (if i get lazy i may just re-use the base i made the last one on then at least then i can keep the hair)

as usual you did wonderfully<3 ^^ i'll give a proper review later ok?

You convey everything so perfectly, with such intense moods and settings. It makes it seem like you're actually there, witnessing it.

I find myself enjoying all of the characters. This...has never happened before. It's amazing. YOU'RE amazing.

And, goddamn, I love those pissy attitudes XP

Aw, they're friends again~
I really liked this chapter. How it went from sad to happy to angry to sad and then back to happy again. It's amazing how moody Marik and Bakura can be sometimes.
I really liked the hospital part. I wonder why Ishizu was expecting from Bakura... hn.
And the arcade part was cute. It was nice to see them all happy and normal... well, more normal than usual, I mean. Bakura stole a bunny for Marik; that is just so freaking adorable (...even though he did end up tearing it to shreds and all). I love how they're starting to care about eachother, but neither really wants to admit it.
But then it started to get all angry. I don't see why Bakura couldn't have just told Marik, he doesn't have to be a stubborn bastard ALL of the time...And then they started fighting and I was really confused as to why Bakura would go to such lengths for the ring at first. But then he passed out and Yuugi explained all. (And I love your Duke, by the way. He makes me laugh.)
And then the sadness again. Marik was freaking out and then he felt really bad once he realized what the problem was. And he was all worried for Bakura and it made me all sad. But then they hugged and made up and everything, and it ended on a happy note ^^ But I'm not gonna lie, I was definitely thinking of... other things when Marik pulled his shirt off xD But then he showed Bakura his back and it was all sweet and stuff~
It was a lovely chapter :3 And don't worry, I like it when chapters are long~