I'm trying to think of Jareth with a AC/DC shirt on.

Curious that Sarah would be left to planning the funeral and such for Mrs Wilson...generally old people have all that taken care of long before they die.

Damn! You need to write more! Me addicted! It is my drug! Feed me more please?

i lov story line.james is quite a shocking name to have jareth's human name.please cont. the story you are doing wondeful job.please update soon

I have enjoyed reading this. Keep smiling. :-)

Short but good :)

happy writing
ks

i love this story


thanks for writing please update

An enjoyable chapter!

:)

what a delightful ending :)

So S doesn't dream...I like that twist :)

You've poignantly captured the feeling of mourning alone in a crowd. Wonderful.

very nice

What a lovely prologue. A wonderful mix of maturity and wistfulness. I am eager to read more...and am glad that I have 11 chaps to read before I have to wait for an update :)

i cant wait for the next part

thanks for writing