 IchibanSweetie 2009-10-17 . chapter 1 I JUST read this. I have chills..so sad,insane,beautifully written in a macabre way. and YES I haave read Bloody KIsses and Strawberry Smiles and agree 100% LightofaThousandSuns is an AWESOME fanfic wirter. I just love your take on this..though this review is a lil late xD. Well better late than never ne?~ Keep back to your writing..I find it mesmerizing (I dunno if its too much praise..I'm just so impressed ^^) |
 LightofaThousandSuns 2009-06-10 . chapter 1T^T WAH *sobs*
That was so beautiful and sad, and and, and...
D8 I LOVE IT. O_O
And I HOPE this brought you out of your writer's block, because it is such an awesome ending! Granted, I pictured a happier ending (Lulz, I am a sap for such things), but as an alternate route, this was the perfect way to go. ^^ I am quite impressed, deary.
And yay for including hallucinations! 8D That scores points in sticking with the BK storyline, since I had my own hallucinations in my own story. You also kept them so well and in character; I think our RP's help with that, haha! My little Biyondi >w< *HUG*
You've got a great entry here, and all I know is that everyone else better step up their game, or you've got this one in the bag.
LOVE *GROMP ;D* <3
~ Cat |