i hated Tracy. ugh. but the story was gr8!

I would like to give Mark a good punch in the nose. NO ONE disses Kevin! He's KEVIN BUTT KICKING LEVIN (as I like to call him). Great story! _

For not watching ep 17 over you were really close with ur first part. It felt like I was watching the episode again.

Uggh I don't really like prepy kids because they are so mean and they think there better then everyboby else just because they have alot of money. I felt sorry for Kevin when that guy called him a criminal:(

I REALLY LOVED THE STORY THOUGH IT WAS VERY VERY VERY GODD]

GOD , I LOVE IT!I liked the episode to...YOOUR STORY IS GREATT SO FAR , CAN'T WAIT TO CONTINUE!

i think there should ove been more chapters and tht they should ove kissed

Sweet!

While I wanted a picture perfect kiss at the end, I believe that your ending was more believable. They are still testing the waters and trying to get a feel for each other outside of their alien "work". Good chapter and great story.

:D Luv it

omge this was ahmazing. please add more of story! adorable. I like this tracey character. post more please!

hee hee cute

To put it simply... I can't wait for chapter 2! They better get Gwen and Kevin together in the show soon. Otherwise I will be forced to take action *smiles evily*Anyways Nice Job!

AH! if you dont write the rest i might faint of impatience! Aaw you make Kevin sound so cute... Tracy bugged me tho... ] r u gonna keep writing?

Great start... Can't believe this is your first Ben 10 fanfic. Loved every bit of it. Can't wait to read more.

Thanks for sharing.

UWE HEE HEE, THIS WAS NICE, A REALLY GOOD FIC, REAL SWEET,