omg. your stories are so touching
i love you
please write more ryosaku fics?

:(

Don't mistake the sad face for a bad story. No! In fact, it was one of the most tear-jerking stories of Ryoma and Sakuno that I have ever read.

Thank you though. This fanfic, made me realize a lot of things about trust, and the bond that needed to form from Ryoma and Sakuno's relationship. Ryoma... *tsk.. *tsk

Arigato! ^^

Ganbatte for your next story! You are phenomenal in "angsty" stories! :)

its really sad...but I liked it
bye

That was really sad, I have to say i really admire you.
Whenever i start writing a tragedy at some point i think of something really funny the characters could do that ruins the mood hehe.

Nice story!

Oh I loved this!
It was so sad but so good! :D
It was great! Good job.

aw...(teary eyed)...
I thought this would end up happy...
anyways nice fic.

Oh my gosh!

I love this story.

"Echizen Ryoma was never brave because he never cried in front of her. He was actually too afraid to let her know that only she could make him cry." I never thought of it that way.

hmn... If only Ryoma didn't call her... maybe she would still be alive.

,i love your story,,..

this was a reaally good story.
i think the characters' personalities were kept very well.

i have a question, though. if ryoma understood the prediction, wouldn't he have been able to know that sakuno was gonna die?
or did he not understand that part?

g0d it's tragic, but then again, that genre helps in getting into the some reader's feelings.

:)) Like it!

nice story!:)

Waha. For me, the pain here's way way better than the first one (Kismet). Why? Because on the first one, there's no exact closure. Well, okay, it's angsty too. VERY. But this? Gah. I don't know what to say.

I'm really imagining what exactly happen on the 'dying' part. :)

And although I've already seen Ryoma crying because of...er, Tezuka on the last part of the PoT series, this? HOMG. I can't imagine the pain it inflicted him. The trauma...because he witnessed Sakuno died himself. I'm anticipating he'd been a single man 'til the day he died. LOL.

I'm blabbing okay? Ignore me.

Anyhow, you have potential on writing very angsty tragic stories. Who knows? You might succeed Nicholas Sparks. Right? ^_^

What did tennis have to do with her dying, though? He came to pick her up, instead of staying at practice. Actually, if he had just stayed at practice she probably would've lived. That was great, but very sad...

Aw. >< So sad! Well written, btu s

OMG what is happening?