sad but nice story... really liked it... good work...

NO WAY IN HELL!THAT IS MESSED UP!

Aw... it's so beautiful! *wails*

*starts crying* WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! *sniffle* Sorry... I'm kinda a sap for emotion... and you had to do this at the same moment I'm listening to sad/sweet music... well, that's my own fault, I guess.

This is beautiful. I've always liked your writing, but I've kinda been reading other stuff. Thank you for reviewing my story and reminding me of all the good authors I've been neglecting to pay attention to. _

In response to the last review, all the characters were given more human characteristics. Natural hair does not come in blue or purple; therefore, I gave both Zel and Xel black hair. One of my favorite fanart artists gives the guys black hair, and I think they look terrific like that. As for the eyes... there's a very, very good reason why I wrote that like I did. However, I cannot explain why, or the story will lose its mysticism.

Last time I checked, Xellos had both violet eyes and hair. But besides that, it's good.

wow! that was so sweet. :) loved it!

sakura

Oh my gods this is soooooooo sad! *sniffles* It's beautiful in a sad way... I LIKE! *goes to cry* .