 plaisance 2009-06-10 . chapter 1Ah. I really love you. Finally someone else posts ChaKyo of quality! :heart: This is very beautifully written and the somewhat sad ending really makes it stick with you. Though, I will nitpick on one thing - Charden's dialog seems slightly out of character, though that could be the alcohol talking. ;) He's a tad more proper than he is in here, but, again, it's probably permissible. I'm really just flapping my mouth here, because this was really good! :3 I hope you write more Charden x Kyoko! |