Very nicely in character - I loved the way you handled Han and Leia. (I also liked the kids being the son of an Imperial officer. Yes, the people are the other side of the fight are ordinary people, with lives of their own, who don't necessarily thing the Rebellion is as wonderful as you do.) Nice blend of action and characterization. One of your better stories, O Great One.

I loved thiis capter so much! It was hilariuos! I couldn't believe that someone had actually wrote that! It was so... I don't know! I just know that it was one of the best stories I ever read!

Gooniegirl

Great Job!

Jade