Haha! I knew Han was up to something with those kids...nice job! That bet was hilarious. Shannon reminds me of a kid I used to babysit *shudders*. Normally I steer clear of anything that has Mara (or Burt, heehee) who seems to just scream Mary Sue, but you make her enjoyable!

The ending was very cute. I really feel for Threepio; there must be millions of jokes about him.

Poor Luke, "revenge is of the dark side." Doesn't he know revenge is sweet? And aren't sweet things good? And good is synonymous with light?

I hope Han's sons are okay! Shannon's kind of annoying, but I like her anyway. The characterizations of the OCs are well done and the regular's are just as good. I wish I had your writing abilities.

I normally don't like AU stories, but I LOVED this. I'm happy that everything turned out alright in the end! You are a great author! :)

Hi there, it's me, I also loved this story. AU but very well settled, even if my two fav chars were married, but not together.

Greatly written, a lots of fun & adventure, I enjoyed reading it.

Do you still write some stories nowadays, or did you stop it ?

At times I wanted to punch Shannon, but I loved Mara, and how she and Han made that bet. Great job!

Lol Awesome job! i loved the idea of the slave children pestering Mara so that Han can win the bet!

Jade