funny lol

Hmm. I have a few issues with your fic. You get constructive criticism from me. I won't be mean, I promise. :D

--Script-format fics are not allowed on FFNet.

--Why is the format so odd? Center formatting is hard to read here on FFNet. Either format your story left-aligned or justify your text (that means your text stretches from one margin to the other evenly).

--Why not take each of these tiny prompts and flesh each of them out to its own drabble? A drabble is a thousand words. It isn't hard. You'd have a handful of fleshed out fics if you did!

--I won't be picky about your English grammar, as you are from Indonesia and English might be your second language. Otherwise, keep on studying your English, and get better!