I loved both ending

I like the alternate ending better.. :D

wow ur good! loveed both endings though! LOL

nice.

hey. that was really good. i just recently got the book. iam in the middle of reading it right now im on chapter eight. i really loved your writing.

aww... the alternate ending was soo sweet. I loved it :)

great job :)

I think this was an amazing fan fic to my favourite book of all time.

Only comment, the end was slithly out of character, but it was still amazing, and also, some of the language wasn't actually accustomed to when the book is set. The book is older English, but some of the language in the fan fic was more modern.

But I hope you keep writing 3

I loved it, it was fantastic please write more :) Good luck!

I thought the combination with the fallout boy song was really good although I dont think Fin would just give up like that I htink she would have Hugo crawling to her begging her to forgive him and make sure he says its ok for her to hunt, i think the last bit was a bit out of character but it is a really good peice of work you have done overall