Awesome story!

yhea what said by the way if you dont mind do a marcus and james thanks

im the who said awsome i forgot to but my name

do shadow of the wolf

awsome

Really sweet and cute

Very beautiful and heart-warming moment between the father and his son. I like that a lot! I hope there are more stories on how Fox is spending times with Marcus and doing a job as a father.

God is what the next game should have as a prologe.I am not joking this stuff is the bomb I really love it.I think this stuff should win a novel this have more chapters if you get more good feed back from guys like me get a deal with a publisher and artest and make this into a good book.

Very good.

DAM UR GOOD!

lol cant wait 4 the translated versions of ur otha stories...

good job! it seems we both like the ending, keep up the good work!

Congratulations on your first Oneshot! I loved the story.

Keep it up! I loved your story ...

Kisses

Such a sweet one-shot, that ending wuz also my fave as well!

you are very good in englis, lo sabias.

cest vrai.

I must say, you did well on the fatherly-sonly front; Fox was pretty well done. And also Marcus' mindset about the academy. Overall, pretty epic!

NICE JOB!