 a concerned reader 2009-11-16 . chapter 2 Dude-yet another yuri from you?
I have no problem reading your stories, and I subscribe to a couple, but there are a few problems. The characters in the stories you write are not always canonically homosexual. While I think that everyone knows Fate Testarossa, Haruka Tenoh and Nina Einstein's sexuality, and I don't have a problem with it (far from it, more power to them), NOT EVERYONE IN THE WORLD IS HOMOSEXUAL. All that you write are yuri lemons, most of which go nowhere and are largely incomplete, and it might be nice if you concentrated on those stories that have more of a plot, and perhaps toned down the sexuality (you have some interesting plot points and it would be nice to see them expanded upon, and opened up to more audiences). I don't mind lemon, but going overboard like you sometimes do can be annoying. Please stop churning out yuri lemons like your Henry Ford and concentrate on some of the interesting plot-driven stories that you have going. I personally like Third Stage, over in Bubblegum Crisis, and Nunally of the Innsurection, if you keep it toned down. I started reading Shattered Ice, until you made Ami all ooc-she's sone to have crushes on the men in the series, not on the women. Also, please don't mix up the different types of love. The form of love that Sailor Moars feels for her princess is agape, religious love, not eros, erotic love. Please stop going overboard like you have been, and take the time to concentrate on a few high quality stories, that don't have the characters going at each other every other chapter, and if you do, please put the lemon/short stories on a different profile from the epics, allowing people to find the diamonds of epics without wading through the rubies of lust.
Sincerely,
A friend
PS. I will send a PM identifying myself shortly, but I felt like I had to get this out in public incase anyone agrees with me. If you object to my points that I have raised, please respond to my PM in a friendly, considerate, way. I welcome a dialogue between people |
 Anonymous 2009-08-06 . chapter 1 Finally, finally, finally, thank God! Someone has written a story about that character in Episode 6, the one who says that she would perfer a kissing reward from Milly Ashford! Oh, that's so great! What a great character, and it is a shame that she is not named. A great story, I think. Takes alittle while, but its totally worth it! Hahaha, that is totally aweseom! Good for you! And I thought she would never come back in anything. |