Very amusing, sweet story.

Couple of points, though: It's not "lie me in the face", it's "lie to my face". Likewise, it's "laugh in my face", not "laugh me in the face".

"While you were sleeping... I raped you."

Yep, title makes perfect sense now.

LOL! It's horrible, but it's hilarious.

This was an amazing story...I had never really thought of L/E in such a way...I had always liked Jane...but lmao I love this! Awesome job!

That was really lovely, I enjoyed it so much. If only other ff authors would see that L and E, despite their age difference are really made for each other. We don't know who E's father was, but I think he must have been a nice man, and Emily must take after him; she is so different from her mother. L's loveless relationship with Jane is IMO a blot on the canon.
Michael.

A bit mushy but so cute <3<3<3<3!! I panicked a bit when i thought Emily was dying! But it would have been cool if she died in childbirth leaving Will as a singleparent. But then child would have to be a girl. Great chappie anyways!

Ok that last chapter was very good but what the HELL is going on in the preview?!?!

he would soften towards you in time...or perhaps harden if that is what you want. Best Line Ever. i love temeriare in this story

Very nice ending. I'd love to be a fly on the wall when Jane reads that letter. Glad Temeraire approves of his future captain. That was very sweet.

Interested to see the new fic posted. Thanks for this one.:)_

-Ellie

“That is a first, sir,” the doctor remarked, “women in this situation usually scream at men and threaten them with a horrible death if they ever so much as touch them again…”
*snerk* Very fun. The letter Emily sent home was delightfully cheeky in places--rather a nice counterpoint to your other story where Laurence is asked to provide offspring (can I call you "mama?"). Very amusing XD

ok...what is going on here?

That was by far the best chapter yet. xD BRILLIANT job. ^^

:D I've read through all the chapters posted so far, and I have to say this is exceptionally well written and incredibly entertaining. Angst, drama, romance, humor--what more could you ask for? I love how you write both Temeraire and Laurence, honestly the two of them just have so much potential for humor...as poor Mr.Jacobs has found to his detriment in the past XD (nothing like hearing an officer be complimented on his firm behind by a dragon...o_0)

Can't wait to read more. Sorry I'm not leaving more fb, I read this right before bed since I couldn't sleep not knowing how things went.

-Ellie

Yes!! Total win for the last two sentences!

this has a slight hint of star wars (episode three) but excellent, the next chapter will be interesting.
your dedicated reviewer, Nimbus Llewelyn