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Donny304
2009-11-13 . chapter 23
Please update. I really liked this story.
Donny304
2009-10-30 . chapter 22
Please update. I don't blame Jake for hating Cameron.
microcheese
2009-10-08 . chapter 21
i luv it!
update soon!

-Luna Carter
Sarah27Lautner
2009-10-08 . chapter 21
Aw! can't wait for the next chapter! I have been following this story and can't wait to see what happens! will Jake come home?
can't wait keep it up you are a great writer!
Donny304
2009-10-04 . chapter 20
Please update. I hope Jake and Cameron can get along. You should show how Jake's decision to run away affected the Baker family.
Donny304
2009-10-01 . chapter 19
Please update. I'm alittle surprised the cop didn't recognize Jake.
Donny304
2009-09-09 . chapter 18
I think it's Tom or Charlie. Please update.
Music Writes
2009-08-30 . chapter 2
I really like the idea of this story but i think you should get a beta reader. Its very confusing because you have some grammitcal mistakes. I really like the plot line though so you should keep writing it, just proofread it a bit more.
Donny304
2009-08-23 . chapter 17
Poor Charlie. They should call the police. Jake's a jerk. Please update.
dreamer
2009-08-22 . chapter 16
i really really like this! something about Peter seems suspicious. is he a drug dealer or something? i luv how you brought Charlie into it and made him really wary around Peter. what's gonna happen now? it'll be funny if the whole family showed up at Peter's doorstep!

update soon!
Donny304
2009-08-16 . chapter 16
Intense chapter, please update. Jake was a jerk to Charlie.
Donny304
2009-08-06 . chapter 15
Jake has some issues. Maybe someone will recognize him. Plrease update.
Donny304
2009-07-31 . chapter 14
Jake, should sneak out and go back home or get away from that house. Please update.
Donny304
2009-07-26 . chapter 13
I thought Mr. Winston would the weird one. I hope something bad doesn't happen to Jake. Please update.
Donny304
2009-07-19 . chapter 12
I can't believe that Jake went to Peter's house. What is a ware? Is that a package. I still don't trust Peter he seems kind of creepy to me. Please update.
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