Just read the manga in one go. It was beautiful and so is this :D

TwT *clapping* that was beautiful! I swear, I almost got teary-eyed! Heehee, I'm such a sucker for well written fluffiness! Totally sweet!

Yes this seriously needs more love ;;

This is so pretty sob

Ohmigosh Mooooooore :D it's so cute

Your fic was amazing and very cute as weel. Why Double Arts was cancelled T.T . Danm Japan.(inconsonable fã)

Again, you done a great work with the fic, this serie was awesome.

Hope you can keep writing great fics.

It's too bad that it was cancelled T_T

Anyways, great oneshot! Word-choice is a little awkward in some places, but, again, great fic! :D

This is just the best ending Double Arts could have, had it not been cancelled. I read it a while back, and seeing this section makes me want to re-read the whole series for the nth time! :))

You're an amazing writer, and you got their personalities perfectly! I hope you write more of them

I only discovered this manga yesterday but I found it cute and was a bit disappointed when I finished it, it lacks of a moment as the one you wrote ! I found your story very cute and it fits really well the spirit of the two characters D

CONTINUE WRITING YEAH! Lots of use of repetition, but it was okay. Hope you do write more :P

Darling! It fit their personalities wonderfully! (especially when he called her -endearingly- idiot)

Gaah, and I am feeling such angst right now! I finished the series last night. My sister had warned me that they had discontinued the series. I thought they would at least hastily find a cure, defeat the bad guy, but NO! They jus fizzled it!

. . . sig But on the bright side, your story made me happy! I hope to add one of my own here some day.

moar! moar! moar! moar! moar! moar! moar! moar! moar! moar! moar! moar! _

I've been waiting for fanfics of this manga for about half a year now .

real awesome. :D

I have no words for this. This is BRILLIANT! Well I'm a new fan of ElxKiri, so I'm going crazy for those two. Nonetheless, I'm really happy to found somebody that is kind enough to write El/Kiri fanfic, cause I just found 5 of them. I even gave up a while because I missed 'Double Arts' section in ff's anime/manga list... I got the link by Google. I'm really glad that you made it happy ending, cause I hate sad endings most of the time. I'm looking forward for your works in El/Kiri!

THE FANDOM NEEDS MOAR LOVE.

And moar fluff from awesome writers like you serious. Write more, please. That was adorable. 3

Ah, you know, I'd never really thought about that before-how they wouldn't have to hold hands at the end... You portrayed it excellently, though!-just how I can imagine it would go. :D

KirixElle... One of my favourite pairings ever. (And one of my favourite manga as well!) :] They're adorable. Hohoho *hobbles off to a corner to have a fangirl moment*

Two thumbs up! 808

This was great! I thought it was really accurate on how those two would probably react. It was so cute, in a dramatic, way!