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| kiara 2002-09-07 ch 4, anon. | abusewow... an ACTUAL introduction to sailor earth though it is a bit lame |
| H3LL 2002-08-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseYes good idea,stop writing this,we'll all use our "imaginations" to finish this crap.AT LEAST, using mind power, we'll be able to remove all the (as sporanox would say) DAMN CLICHES you used in this story.Oops I forgot if we DID remove all the cliches in this story then there would be NO story.Oh well that wouldnt be too bad.Better than "USAGAY RELATED TO A SAIYAN" "USAGAY IS POWERFUL" blablablablaBLA!It's all crap...You authors need to learn how to write a non sm praising fic.These are getting more and more ridiculous. -H3LL |
| luna 2002-08-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseyour being a big meanie, i wanted to know what happens next you have to keep going,please? |
| Baby Blonde and Star chick 2002-08-15 ch 8, | abuseHey...this would be a good story if you would finish...but since your not can i claim it...I want to write a gohan and serena story and i was never able to get it to make a begining... Please please....i will give full credit.....I really want to write it or finish it.....i promise it will be good. Please im me or e-mail me and tell me.....thank u so much..... ja ne little cosmos |
| Sliver of Melody 2002-08-15 ch 8, | abuseoh wow.. |
2002-08-14 ch 8, anon. | abuseI'm sorry but I didn't like ur story at all. u need 2 have more details. i know u said u weren't continuing this story but maybe u cud use my advice in later stories. |
| ssjgirl 2002-08-14 ch 8, anon. | abusePLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!! KEEP GOING!! I LOVE THIS FIC!! IT IS REALLY GOOD!! DON'T STOP!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Lady-Meyhem 2002-08-09 ch 7, | abuseawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww why ya do'in that. I really like this story. |
| gwen 2002-05-20 ch 3, anon. | abusei just wanted to say that i think your story is good and i like it |
| AllisonR. 2002-05-19 ch 6, anon. | abusePlease write more chaptors we need a ending to the best story in sailor moon history. |
| Sailor V 2002-04-19 ch 6, anon. | abuseSo far you beat my record for short storys! |
| Sliver of Melody 2002-04-15 ch 6, | abusecoo coo |
| Zackire 2002-04-15 ch 6, | abusei would give anything..well almost anything to see the soft side of my favourite vegata..... |
| SERENA 2002-02-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseHURRY UP IT'S GETTING GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK FOR USING MY NAME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Little One 2002-02-02 ch 5, anon. | abuseAlright who's the hottie I know he's got to be hot who is he !!!!!!! sorry great story *whispers* to much pop music |