Yu-gi-oh? That entire series is just..."lame" doesn't even cover all of it.

You need to be spanked good for putting Himemiya Chikane and such a completely asinine character in the same paragraph.

huh... wow that was really good, i like how you randomly used kaiba from yugioh for this! ^_^

This is one of the best stories for this couple that ihave read yet, surprisingly. At first, I wasn't sure if I should bother reading such a short story, but I realize it was worth it now. There's only one story I liked more than yours, called "capturing a heart" --a kannazuki no miko fiction, just like this one was. Great job, I spotted no
errors in this worth mentioning! ^^

love your story!! so kawaii<3 please add more chapters!

LOL and it took money to know money:). Great story from beginning to end. How, if I may ask, did Chikane and Himeko get out of their cycle of reincarnation?

awesome story, I love it! If you see that I 've added it to S:alert then sorry... I didn't see that it was complete.


as for the suitor then... I think it's Kiba Seto from Yugio...

Great story man. It's funny how you only had to use a few words to discribe him and the name that pops into (mostly) everyone's mind is kaiba. I didn't even watch Yu-gi-oh that much as somehow I knew.

I love that you never actually say that the guy is Seto Kaiba. Not a bad story, I enjoyed reading it.

hehe it was really intresing :D and yay Hiemko gets another chance ^^ hehe they are so cuute Chikanexhimeko ^^

I love it! Whos this man? Tsunasa or the step brother or Souma? Certainly not giroshi but stil there isn't a lot of boy in KnM. Hope you'll update soon to another wonderful chapter!

really, you combined Yu-Gi-Oh! and Kannazuki No Miko together jesus... well that is possible considering that Kaiba is a total ** but nice story, i think that you should continue on with this story too

I got a real kick out of the Transformers Refrence as I am a big fan of the franchise, but Prime's line is actually "One shall stand(You have Rise). One shall fall." but other then that it was cute.

OMG! was chikane suiter seto kaiber?!?! man what a shock lol and man really easy to tell...so does that mean he is gunna be part of the story or only a guest character??...
yay himeko gets a second chance with chikane parents =D thats good hehe

hope you update soon ^_^

dude half way through it i FINALLY realize it was Kaiba!! of all people u had a Yugioh character in this! ohh man that was great! heh that last part cracked me up! hope u write more! ^^

haa cute!! i really hate that other guy!! i wished that chikane beat him in chess!! stupid arrogant man.

great to read the support of makoto and souma. very sweet one shot!

thanks thanks!