Loved the infusion of the humour and the hurt/comfort. Loved the costuming and the characterisaion. Spot on in my books.

Haha, this was great! Team Shep at their drug-busting best! I loved Rodney... I mean *ahem* The Chemist ;), I loved Ronon's newfound obsession with Tombstone; and I loved all of Teyla's reactions (that's right!) :P LOL. And the Genii inolvement... nice touch :).

I also love that the Miami Vice theme is constantly running through Rodney's head, distracting him :)

Interesting story. It was fascinating to read.
Congrats!

great! very suspenceful!

Hahaha, loved the part where Rodney simply turned it off :D *giggles*

It was awesome!

Love, Winnie

It was awesome to see a story by you.I've missed your touch. This one was great. I love how smoothly and perfectly all the characters unfold. I really love your stuff. Write again soon,PLEASE! God bless you

Oh my gosh, I was totally channeling 'the Entertainer' the ENTIRE time. Redford/Newman in the Sting are a total classic combo. Anyhoo, great great job. The cultural references, sarcastic wit, and fast paced action were all wonderful.

So, massive massive kudos!

maybe they should watch miami vice it might help him get the tune out of his head lol :) great story i enjoyed it like i always do :)