OMG! What a great story! Thanks for sharing!

Nice work! I was so tense reading it after I figured out who the rider was, I could hardly wait to get to the end and see if Adam lived. Thanks for posting this!!

That was a really cool story. I'm a big Adam fan and I loved the mystery rider.

I've read this before, but enjoyed it every bit as much this time. Great job of weaving the rider into the story.

Marion

Great story! The ending was great! You did an excellant job at writing this story! I love how you put the death on the pale horse! Keep up the great work! :)

Absolutely amazing fic. Well paced, well written and in character all the while. Congrats on this piece of writing.