cool. keep it up =] i really wanna know wat happens when she gets to alwas

It's okay you need some time to update, but you should write longer chapters. Waitin' for the next update, and hope it's a longer chapter than the last one.

Hm... A promising start, definitely has potential for a great story, but you should deepen into the whole Canaletto-threatening-the-galaxy-again thing, maybe he should be involved in Eva's accident... Hope you'll update soon!

Loved the first chapter!

Your summary sounded interesting... I like it! You never see any AikkaxOC's anymore and NO ONE ever updates their OSR stories! (/T) Anywho, I can't wait for the first chapter!