Aw, poor Miyuki. This is getting very good. I hope the next chapters come soon!

Ok, this is a very interesting story. The odd thing is that it's not original, it's playing on a classic theme that I find in fanfictions (at least on this site). That is of a girl in a male's role fulling in love with her senpai...I really wish there was a better/non-Japanese term that I could use... ...yeah...

Anyway, I hope you continue. I would just stress that you put a little more into the dialog. Dialog is the most important key to communicating characters and your story has a lot of rough, but really good characters. The relations, I hope, get a lot deeper and more tragic, since this is a romance.

God!! I wish I could get into something as much as I get into romance. I think a dwell on it too much.

Oh!
The idea for this one is a good one.
though, don't you think it'd be easier if Miyuki had just cut her hair?
Or is that going to be part of the story, her hair that is.
This story is also really well done, you should continue it.
Please and thank you are the magic words. XD

yay please keep it up i love your story!

yay! another chapter. i wonder what's going to happen next... keep updating! ^w^

I really like your stories. I hope to be able to read more soon. =3. Sorry for a stupid review but I don't know what to say really. LOL

*sniff* *sniff*

Poor Miyuki, and oh~
He chose her and knew it was life threatening?

Is that supposed to be a compliment towards her or a insult?

either way it was still cool! :D

Much improved from the first chapter, Yukiko! :) Congrats.

OMG! SO FUNNEE!!

whe~ a new chapter! yeahy *cheers*

Oh this is so cool, I knew something like that would happen, but its still so *what?!?!*
And Waka is already suspicious.. oh boy... I wonder what would happen next?
What will Miyuki do? its not like she can escape the situation...
But... *sight* oh boy... Miyuki is in for it...

By the way, Congratulation for finishing all the exams! :D *two thumbs up*

Update soon =)

Yay! You updated. I love your stories. Especially your WakaxOC stories. I knew Waka was going to choose Miyuki but her reaction still made me laugh. And Abe's answer to Waka's question about the bruise 'priceless' LOL

Anyway This chapter was much improved from the first. I could only find 2 problems with it, but that's just me

(1)After Miyuki woke she says "I passed out in head quarters! I thought I was at head quarters! CONSIDERING I PASSED OUT THERE!"

-She already mentioned she passed out at headquarters theres no need to repeat it in the sentence

(2)After Miyuki yells at Abe he responds "Miyuki ! Please! I didn’t do anything ! All I did was put the Yukata on! Please! I didn’t do anything!"

-Saying "Please! I didn’t do anything!" twice seems a bit repetitive. you could have written something like "Please! I didn’t do anything" followed by "I didn't do anything, really!" or something like that. You really shouldn't use "please" in the same sentance twice unless the character is begging or something

Anyway sorry for the long review I really love this story and Waka ^_^

ah!
I want to know who that woman is!
What is up with her? her mother? or her sister? or who?!?!
what dose she have to do with Miyuki´s past?... another question.. WHAT IS HER PAST?!?!
so keep it up and keep updateing, cause i wont be able to know how it all goes if you dont coninue ;)

poor Miyuki...

your trusty fan,
xAiriinx!

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UPDATE i wanna read more of Miyuki! hehe :D

Yay! A new chappy! Update please!

yeahy!´Your new Fanfiction is out! I love it!

Miyuki disguised as a boy... Interesting indeed!
I like her attitude to... I wonder if Waka would find out one day... And what are her 'powers' ?
What will Waka do if he would find out? ah~ so many questions!
And i need answers quick! So update soon ^.^

We~ Í was so happy as i finished reading this chapter =)
Really nice!

Update! But please don't put the story in bold, I'm not use to it, no offense. BUT UPDATE!! THIS IS AMAZING!