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Reviews for: Broken Rivalry
Jedi Honor Bound Ninja
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
oh only a one shot...but so tempting :D Nice job!!
Tara La'Quinn
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
Hey Orodruin, I've taken a general break from fanfiction over the last two months, but now I'm back! I LOVE this story! It was the day that Kakashi's dad died right? Gai is a great rival, and I really how this story showed that. Definitely adding this to my favorites! Well, on to the your other stories!
chocolatte delight
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Wow, Gai's so... caring. In a strange masochistic kind of way. He doesn't mind the beating if he can help his rival through something. You have a great way of showing their rivalry :)
SkywardShadow
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
Hmm..so was that the day his father died or something?
Anyway, awesome work. I've never read a fic that featured a young Gai before, and it was definitely a treat. XD
Well done!
silver-eyed
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
omg, i take it that this is the day that sakumo commited suicide? well i'm glad that gai saw through him; he really is a sweet guy and quite perceptive despite his outgoing weirdness. kakashi is actually quite lucky to have him tag along. huh, that's kinda like naruto and sasuke now that i think about it, lol. the circles in life are ironic. or maybe it's just kishimoto and his ninja universe. good story, love it just like all the rest! have fun on your vacation! XD
Prescripto13
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
I liked this one--very well-written!
false sourires
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
Great story. ^.^
I loved how Gai didn't tell Rin or Obito Kakashi's problem. And that he was willing to let Kakashi take out his anger on him.
My favorite quote:
Still, the Uchiha couldn’t dislike him because he was a nice kid and he constantly bothered Kakashi.
I could see Obito thinking that.
Crazy Hyper Lady
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
aw... that's sweet... in a... twisted sort of way... i think... haha. Anyway, I really liked it! That's a great way of putting their rivalry/denied-friendship. Love it! :D
chessvain
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
it was wonderful as usual except i couldn't help but feel that you left too much left unsiad at the end. it just felt like something more should of been said between kakashi and guy or atleast a little insight in to what guy was thinking when he was being beaten on.
Bam-There You Go
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
aw, its such a cute little story. poor kakashi and his "Day of Great Sorrow" lol, poor Gai and his eternal one-sided rivalry, and poor obito and his complete obliviousness. lol whatever, it was a really good story
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