bahah!
do you smell something burning? oh wait thats just my heart burning for you. I loved it! especially the last one.
cheers

col funfic! yes, i made it FUNfic rather FANfic.:D

lol that was hilarious the pick up lines are so cute! i love the last one lol

Ha ha ha! I love bad pick-up lines, they're hilarous! And I think Ed's was the worst (and possibley the most confusing because I don't remember anything from math). The story was great and the characters were really funny!

Pick up lines from Colonel Roy Mustang... genius...hihihi
Gotta love his effort... Nice one!

IT WAS SO CHEESY I LOVED IT! OMG

nice one!

ahahaha. XD it's so funny and sweet!

Good job! ^^