 Touch of Green 3/27/12 . chapter 3I think you should follow the manga, as you said it would be much more believable and definitely easier. Other than that, great story, has a lot of potential, and of course, update please! |
 xlollx 12/25/11 . chapter 3I am literally begging you to continue this! I adore this story, I'm a sucker for alternate plots. The last line made me laugh so much. :) |
 destroying tokyo 5/5/11 . chapter 3I love where this story is going. I hope you're still planning on continuing it.
There aren't enough EnvyEd fics out there. |
 VampireloverD 4/25/11 . chapter 3em, I know you said that you wouldn't just drop it but it's been about two years... Does that mean that you have dropped it or will you come back at some point? I'm just asking cuz it's really good and actually realistic which is more than I can say for most fics. I don't want to nag you but could you please reply and tell me?
So far though, its really interesting, it should be good to see where you go with it. |
 Envios 1/9/11 . chapter 3I think that you should rewrite the entire fma plot because i think it would be more interesting that way...but that is just my opinion... |
 newXmoonXfox 7/19/10 . chapter 3FMA has, since you wrote this AN, finished entirely. Therefore you should be able to, if you wish, update as quickly as you want by following the manga.
Personally, for tards like me who only read as far as Envy's death online and then swore to only read it as they bought it (shut up I know I'm moronic), I would like it if you simply made up your own plot.
But really, whatever floats your boat right? Just please keep this going! And please add in lotsa Ed/Envy goodness like the summary says! X3 I'm really excited for more! |
 Jeilox 5/8/10 . chapter 2Im not good with spotting errors... at all... I love this story. |
 hopelessbitterone 1/2/10 . chapter 3I love this fic, is it dropped because you know I can wait |
 Animefan514 12/14/09 . chapter 1Well, if it were me I would try to do alittle bit of both. To try and have a slight guideline just in case. |
 razatip 11/13/09 . chapter 3FMA depressed me by finally axing off Envy, but it gives writers like you the opportunity to rewrite him back into the manga! x3 I say do what you want: stem off and do your own thing or follow the manga. You should decide, not the readers. :)
I personally would enjoy either route. I'm torn between the ideas of how you would incorporate Envy into the recent manga chapters and the possibilities of more recent updates. xD
Anywhoo, I like seeing a story with the adorable parasitic worm Envy in it. Can't wait to see Mustang's reaction to Ed allowing Envy to get his body back. o.o |
 Half Human Homunculi 10/21/09 . chapter 3I also vote towards this being as close to canon happenings as possible. :)
I will also be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :D |
 Agatsuma Ritsuka 9/19/09 . chapter 3-shrugs- I suppose it's up to you. Whilst it staying canon would be nice I also don't want to wait. But if it stays canon you always have some sort of guideline so it might be updated faster on a regular basis... I don't know you so I don't know what to vouch for. However I do like what's happened so far... And I really need to finish up with the manga to figure out what you mean by worms. |
 Lolmaster27 8/4/09 . chapter 3D:
I wanted to find out what happened to Envy-san...
:D please update! |
 Anna Babyxox 8/2/09 . chapter 3Hey, just looked up your profile to see if you had any other FMA fics and I am sobbing at your talent. You write Envy better than anyone else I've ever seen! Anyway, my two cents is that you rewrite FMA to suit your story because if you copy what's going on in the manga and just add Envy in to spice it up it's going to get boring, I think, because we've already read what transpires in the manga...in the manga, you know? But those are just my thoughts, I'm sure you'll come up with something to impress me as you have with the rest of your work. Thanks for the read, and have a great day. ) |
 CriminallyInsane.com 7/14/09 . chapter 3*stares at the question in Chapter 2 [counting the prologue]*
Is it... Envy?
xD; *shot'd*
Anyways, i say stick to the real story-line.
*nods* Yep, do that. D |