hi there! i love this story ... poor oli, fancy forgetting your bithday! and i think said bithday is febuary 16th ( my friend from japan insists it is the same day as mine )

Woops...forget to tell you that Oliver's birthday is actualy Febuary 24th .

Wow is the only adj I can think about your story. It's really one of the best story I ever read by now. Little tip: a way of writting that is 100% scot is changing the you in ya. s funny comparing the short&formal letter from Robert and the Long&Friendly from Johnny.

Big kizz&hugz,

Phyllida

this was super intresting and cute the majestics are so cool especially oliver good story loved the photo frame

Aww, this was so cute! I love reading about Oliver and Enrique, even if it is a friendship fic. Absolutely precious and there were very few typos in this. The card from Robert and the piece of paper from Johnny were well written in that I could actually connect their voices to the words. Excellent work!

I hope my review has pleased you. Have a lovely day, dearie. :)

"A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding gift a reader can give . Please use this golden opportunity to offer a well deserved praise and/or tips for improvement."

That is what the review box thingy tells me to do, but it doesn't sound fun to me. This is more my style:

OMG! Thank you for the super fantastic fabulous amazing birthday gift! (XD) This brightened up my birthday when I saw it in my inbox, and even more when I read it! I also would like to add that it is the very first present I recieved, so that automatically makes it the most special. That and the fact that it's from you. XD

Funny you should make Oli's birthday June 2nd...I didn't know when it was either, so I made it May 2nd in my mind. Great minds think alike-or at least similarly. XD

I really do love this story...and I definitely wouldn't put it past Johnny to take pictures of people when they aren't looking. XD And cute little Oli forgot when his birthday was! Ah well, at least Enrique was there to remind him...and bring presents. XD

'Tis a super awesome story, and just what I wanted! (Well, not just what I wanted...I honestly didn't know what I wanted...but now that I have it it's exactly what I would've asked for! XD YOu know me so well...and of course it had to have the Majestics in it. XD

I gotta start working on ideas for your birthday next year. That way I can make it extra special! But I really don't thik I could top this!

Thanks for the present! I seem to be rambling so I'd better wrap this up. This is possibly the longest review I've ever written...:D