This is the first fic I've read that coldly calls attention to Bulma's idiosyncrasys. I love them, though; she's a great character because of that complexity. And the first fic I've read from Yamcha's POV. Go you!

thumbs up!

That was wonderful, I think you captured all of the characters wonderfully. This is how I always imagined it going down.

Poor Yamcha.

Aww Sarah, that was really neat. I really really liked it. I actually caught myself gasping a couple of times, when Yamcha saw the glove was one of them. I actually felt so sorry for him. Bulma was soo cold! God I always feel sorry for Yamcha, I mean I think he is a good guy. :(

This was really nice, I would love to read anything B/V you write in the future (crosses fingers)

me encantó este fic. muy creible la manera de describir poqué Yamcha sabía.

Great job! I really got into it...I just wished there was more. It was so capturing. But you used the same expressions and words a couple of times, you should try new things sometimes. I hate Yamacha but I liked how all of them were pertrayed, including him [thats a 1st] (lol). Kepp up the good work!

very good. I liked it. Keep writing good stories like this

That was nicely done and very realistic. Normally v/b stories have unnecssary drama and that's what makes them great, but sometimes simplicity is its own reward.

very interesting

AWESOME! I LOVE IT!

Good job!

Awww, poor lil Yamcha. Yeah right! I think you did a great job of portraying him as a weak sniveling pathetic creep! Yay for Bulma!

It was cute. But it's not like it hasn't been used before. And remember, the thesaurus is your friend. You used 'quite' about 4 times in 3 sentences. Completely, entierly, fully, thoroughly, and absolutely are all good words too.

OMG I luv these fics dooodooodoodooo *dancing around happily* (,')

Very Good! A little short, but good all the same! I wish you could continue it though... But anyway, it was really good! *_*