that was great! i love the little vegeta attitude... "good luck, son... but you better not come back again."! that is so vegeta! great job! *smiles*

What's up with all the wonderful DBZ stories of late? Especialy this one! Thanks a mill.

wow nice work I'd like to see the time disturbed by somthing. eep up good work.

That waz trez kewl _ So kawaii :) luved it.