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Oathi 6/13/10 . chapter 1
Oi, kawaii :]
simply anonymous 6/24/09 . chapter 1
aw.. that's so sweet. X3
knighted lioness 6/11/09 . chapter 1
i thought this was very cute, although you may want to adjust the french phrase. translators are never great. it would read better if you wrote "Parmi les centaines de gens dans ce monde, je vous ai trouve." Using "entre" just doesn't quite make sense in this case.
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