 ArialChaos 7/1/11 . chapter 1I must say that this was a lovely story, my compliments ] |
 Esplandian 11/6/09 . chapter 1For Roshi there is more joy in desiring than in being desired; That perverted old man we love so much. |
 Moonraker One 12/11/03 . chapter 1Brilliant. It was completely brilliant. WAY too lacking on the detail department, but brilliant.
I've scarcely seen such a wonderful example of irony used in a story before.
(p.s., I have a story of mine that is called "I Am Not Your Daughter". This story is about Bulma, except she's the daughter of someone...you wouldn't expect. Please R&R so I know at least ONE PERSON has read it!) |
 Blind Angelic Assassin 3/26/03 . chapter 1Lol, that was so cute! |
 Kiteekat 10/28/02 . chapter 1... Working at a library will make you VERY bored, no offense. It was good though. The quartet with the idiotic names made me laugh more than anything. And honestly, that has always been the way I Master Roshi came across, to me anyway. Some of my friends think he's cool... I think the bunch of 'em have problems! ; Who's right? Anyhow, good sense of humor. And I know a guy like that (younger Master Roshi, NOT older). He's good looking, sorta teddy bear cute but still movie star hot, and every time I even smile at him he lights up like a Christmas tree... is that a bad thing? |
 AurorWriter 2/13/02 . chapter 1ROTFL! This was great! |
 Adro14 1/17/02 . chapter 1OK Master Roshi WANTING to be chased? weird. And whats with the 1.1.2 stuff? |
 Jesscheaux 12/27/01 . chapter 1OMG, that was sooooooo funny! The chicks are finally going after Roshi and he doesn't like it!
Who would've thought. Great idea, very original.
Good work! 'twas very amusing! Ja ne! |