aw...Victor's letter is so...so...sweet!

A lovely story, and I love how you made them in character! :D lol Bonejangles and Vic... huh... never thought of that... Victoria is also my name, which I found quite amusing.

Please continue this if you could! I unfortunately don't have any ideas given the fact that I just saw this movie today (lol so sad I know), but hopefully you can complete this. This is definitely going to be added to my Story Alerts :)

the plot bunnies are evil little things of doom.

squee! i hope Victor is happy when he sees Emily. he needs to get out of his drunk stupor.

lol. i like the end of this chapter. it's quite entertaining.

it's so sweet that it's sad. i feel so bad for Victor. his life is going to hell.

ok, so i was wrong, but poor Victoria. i feel so bad for her that it makes me almost cry.

this can't go down well. there's no way that Victoria is going to be happy that Emily has her child.

what happened to the baby? no!

aw...i feel so bad for them. i want Victor and Emily to get together, but i don't at the same time.

oo...the drama is beginning.

oh how could Victor say such a thing! i can't wait to read more. you're very good at writing. i love this story.

you are doing very well, do more chapters. victor and emily need to get together sooner or later

wonderful! do more! its very good, moving and thrilling!

it was good!