I just found this story and I just loved it. For being 16 (which you aren't now in the year 2012. lol) you aren't that bad at writing. This is the 2nd story of yours I've read and like. I was surprised to see that this is the ending. A part of me wanted more but at the same time this really was a good place to leave it. Good job! :)

Bravo! Bravo! Beautiful! Great job! This is just so cute. And I actually liked the drama for once. Great job!

i love this story :) id love a sequel of when the go back to forks to go see charlie and more fans and paparazi :)

WOW :o That was one of the best stories ever! I can't wait to read another! You are really talented at writing!

This was an amazing story i think there should be a squeal or more to the story

is Asphyxiated a real band?

The ending was pretty abrupt

but i love the story

the band name is pretty strange

you do know what it means right?

course you do any way

i love the story

and i can't wait to read more of your work

best of luck

ABF

I LOVED THIS ENDING. I AM SAD THAT THIS IS OVER. I LOVED READING THIS THOUGH. AWESOME JOB ON THIS.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. POOR EDWARD. GLAD HE TOLD BELLA WHAT HAPPENED.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED THE BELLA AND EDWARD.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED THE BELLA AND EDWARD. I AM GLAD THAT HE DIDNT LEAVE HER ALONE.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED THE SONG. LOVED BELLA AND EDWARD.

THIS CHAPTER. MADE ME TEAR UP A BIT.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED BELLA AND EDWARD.

LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED BELLA AND EDWARD. POOR EMMETT FEELING LIKE A FIFTH WHEEL.