 Kaito Lune 2009-10-25 . chapter 11Holy frickin' heck! That was awesome!! Whoot! Go Sabine! Kick Traum's can!! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 kacsnaruhina 2009-10-11 . chapter 10Yeah, I'm a bleach fan (Love the couple Ichigo and Rukia almost as much as I like naruto and Hinata *0*), but the "king" story will have a different explanation, there will be a chapter for it later (can't give spoilers, but many aspects of Izzy's personality will become clearer). But, despite the inspiration, I don't really see the heart as Zangetsu or Shirosaki, he's different (you'll see ^^). But thanks for the reviews! I'm glad you liked. |
 Kaito Lune 2009-10-11 . chapter 10This is getting so interesting, kacsnaruhina! Charles so has a thing for Auri! Izzy is going to have such a hard time, not just having Ulshald (dunno if I spelled that right) after him but the Heart having alternate motives. The thing with the Heart reminds me of something from Bleach with Ichigo's hollow's side wanting to become the superior consciousness. Can't wait for the next chapter for Izzy to kick Traum's butt! |
 May Kat 2009-10-11 . chapter 10I wonder what's going on with Kari, and what (or who) is possessing her. In the end, when it was raining in Koushiro's inner world, it reminded me of Ichigo, from Bleach. How his zanpakto hates the rain. And how the Heart refers to Koushiro as 'king', it reminds me of the hollow Ichigo as the horse and Ichigo as the king. Was that what you were basing that on? It was unique how you used Portuguese in the story since it's probably your main language. |
 Kaito Lune 2009-09-26 . chapter 9Interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter! I know what you mean about having too much homework to work on stuff you want to work on. |
 May Kat 2009-09-26 . chapter 9huh, the Heart seems a bit...mean. yay, izzy brought him bak! :D |
 May Kat 2009-09-12 . chapter 8I wonder what Izzy's like underneath that self-control. I hope he can rescue them from Traum! |
 Kaito Lune 2009-08-24 . chapter 7Sorry for the lack of reviews. ^^;
Chapter 4: Wow! That Traum person is rather wicked. I'd rather not cross paths with him. Poor Izzy. And something tells me that's not the last of Glaube. Besides, he may not be the only one that's crazy.
Chapter 5: Whoa. Interesting. *goes to read the next chapter*
Chapter 6: Wow. Kinda sounds like Ken's relationship with his older brother with the jealousy and wanting them to leave. Sometimes, losing something will only make you realize what you had and what could have been.
Chapter 7: Glad that they were skeptical at the begining! Oh boy, with Traum there, things won't be good. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 May Kat 2009-08-23 . chapter 7I wonder whether the association and Weisheit's group will eventually work together. I'm glad some of the Digidestine (namely Matt and Sora) aren't so quick to trust Traum and Unschuld. Thank you for mentioning me! You're so nice! |
 May Kat 2009-08-16 . chapter 6Wow, I would have never expected Mr. Izumi to be so cold-hearted. But surprises are what make the story interesting! ;) |
 May Kat 2009-08-10 . chapter 5wow, the chapters are getting more and more intense! |
 May Kat 2009-08-04 . chapter 4i'm really enjoying this story! please update when you have the time! :D |
 Kaito Lune 2009-07-11 . chapter 3Intresting so far! |
 jerome121 2009-07-10 . chapter 2interesting ! and dnt worry there was less mistakes in the second chapter much better - not that care about mistakes but u seemed alittle concerned :D please continue i like to see where this story goes |
 kacsnaruhina 2009-07-09 . chapter 2I thought they were able to digivolve without the crests since adventure 02 (when they got that "globe" from Azulongmon). I assumed it was permanent, so I didn't bother to explain how the envolving was possible. It was diferent on american's version of the show? (I'm basing the fanfic on Brazil's version) |