Oh. That's sad. Love it.

Ahhhh, I love this. It's been like, years since you updated, but maybe someday! :3

this is such a cool story! i can't wait to see the next part :)

Ul...qui...or...ra...That's so depressing! But of course, that's exactly what I'm looking for. I love how you write everything in such simple language...I'm reading your reviews now and I see one that says you need more detail. I don't think so (although everyone is entitled to their own opinion). I really like this style 8D Actually, reminds me of my own -shot- Although mine's nowhere as near as good as yours

T'is awesome. *wipes tears*

Hope you continue. Can't say much more.

Not bad. Maybe it could have some more detail but I like this idea.

Max

Not a bad start, I find myself starting to like this character more already. Few places I saw where you have sentence fragments, such as "the only sunshine in his life."

And it seemed like you could've gone into greater detail in places, such as his relationship with his sister. And this vampire obsession, which seems like something recurring.