I love this story. It got me giggling.

I'm so glad you started writing again! Your stories are amazing :D

Hehehe! That was so cute! I hope you decide to continued to write fanfiction I really like your stories!

I could actually picture that happening in the anime xD It was so cute! And the characters were all very IC. In other words, it's perfect *-*

It's so hard to find quality Sess/Rin stories anymore... both well-written and hilarious. THANK YOU!

LOL, That is absalutly funny!
I hope you can continue with this story if you can!

This is quite possibly the most adoreable thing I've ever read. Thanks!

I love that story. It was so cute!! I knew Jaken was going to get kissed but the Sesshoumaru/Rin relationship is my favorite. And Jaken was hilarious. Good in-charcter work Kagome bringing the Fairy Tales made sense.

This was most enjoyable! I could see it actually being an episode, the characters all were perfect and your descriptions painted a clear picture in my head! I thought it was sweet how Sesshomaru just let her be adorable, just to ** Jaken off. And that was genius, her kissing Jaken! I kept waiting for it to happen. Nice job, excellent work!

That was so cute!! I loved it!! I love Rin and Sesshomaru pairing!!

This was so freaking cute! I don't think I have any other comments for this- spelling was on par and the story flowed well. I remember having the same reaction as Rin when I was a child...Perhaps she suffers from an over-active imagination too? :D

You should do more one-shots in this theme. That's the only other comment I could come up with.

Kudos!

Oh Rin, why are you so cute? This story is adorable and totally cute! Of course you knew that XD Anyway, thank you for this story and hope there is more to come =D

Absolutely adorable! If you wanted actual feedback, I'm sorry, but I loved it the way it is.