 Squeaky Bella 7/6/10 . chapter 1I think this is cute and funny. I like it a lot! :D |
 barbarito 2/19/10 . chapter 1That was fucking AWESOME! Seriously almost peed y pants from laughing so hard! |
 xCrazyKindOvWeirdx 1/18/10 . chapter 1lol made me giggle in a few places... nicely done!
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 LucasTillGirl 1/6/10 . chapter 1COULD YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY? IT'S GREAT! |
 pesuasion 11/22/09 . chapter 1that was good not the last chapter is it? |
 teishamarie 8/27/09 . chapter 1Oh wow!
This is so great! |
 Sapphire Sweetheart 8/9/09 . chapter 1That was HILARIOUS, it's hard to imagine Edward in 80's threads. You should totally do a sequel XD |
 mycrookedsmile 7/20/09 . chapter 1that was hilarious! |
 CrCullenZ 7/2/09 . chapter 1 this story is so cool ;) i'm actually a little embarrassed that i know all of these songs. bella was way different than normal, but it was nice to see her take charge for once :) the bad boys thing tho...oh geez there are no words :D |
 xFender'sGirlx 7/1/09 . chapter 1Lol, I Love it! (although I cringed at the thought of Edward with an 80's look) But Its awesome and very original. :) |
 LovesBella 6/22/09 . chapter 1 It's kind of funny. I don't get how Edward went to a brothel, since it is so non-fandom and there doesn't really seem to be much of a point to changing that part of the storyline...same with Bella's virginity, come to think of it. But I enjoyed Emmett's parts. |
 mexicantt 6/17/09 . chapter 1This was adorable! I love how you have him as a vamp but it's still different, and how his uncle took him to a brothel when he was human still. *snicker*
Are you keeping this as a one-shot or planning to add some more? |
 Alejandra111 6/15/09 . chapter 1OMGOSH! I LOVED IT! OMGOSH! That was freaking amazing! Pleased continue this story! It was fascinating! ] |
 cloisleytonforever 6/15/09 . chapter 1Great story I liked that bella and edward meat when she was a baby |
 psychodancechick89 6/12/09 . chapter 1Oh my god, I loved this! I was laughing through pretty much the entire thing...especially the PHS cameo. That definitely set me off on a giggle-fest, kinda like what happened when I first read Twilight and saw that it was set in Forks. I think it took me a good five minutes to stop laughing at that. XD |