Most of the story is great. There are a few things that are left unexplained. I'm kinda sad about the ending. :( Ranma and Kasumi make an excellent couple, much better than Ranma and Akane. I was hoping for that coupling.

You need to expand the story to include

the events that changed Nabiki. Just

mentioning them kinda cheapens the whole

thing.

Great one shot. Very well done.

Very nice Ranma fic. Quality stuff with Ranma's emotions and inner thoughts and the little conflicts arising.

All's well that ends well... I can't get enough Ranma fiction, though I really don't know why. I hope to see more of your stuff on , 'cause I know I'll read it. The idea was interesting and presented in an interesting way, and it didn't leave me hanging. The ending is the most important part of any fic in my mind. Off to read more... :) - Moogle