Total. Hotness. You are awesome. You are so in my Favorites.

Who would flame this story? It's hot!

Very sweet.

Wow that was hot and so so sexy!! Great job!!

very senual, not tacky in the least. hope to see more

Phew, short and smutty! Me likes it.

Three things. 1: This is very sweet. A lot of the time people write this stuff just to get off, but this was very touching. 2: You probably should change this rating to M since it depicts sex. It isn't overly raunchy, but still fall into the M rating. 3: What does Spock say at the end? I don't know Vulcan or any Vulcan translation sites. I'm a fledgling Trekkie as well.

-HaleyJo

Rated M, yeah, but whatever...this was so hot ;) I could certainly read more. This pair has become a favorite, so any well written fic is a big yes for me!

Just so you know... This should be rated M.

This was very hot. And enjoyable. I could feel the passion.

I've got a few suggestions that I'll PM you... but if you've got more to the story I'm interested in hearing it.

I think I need a glass of water...

Rated T or Rated M...lol it was cool