I know you might not read this due to your leaving but I still need to post this. I can now say that I am terrified Atem/Yami thanks to you. I understood that this was a rape story but still... I'm speechless. Your writing style is so, so. I don't even know what to say. Saying good is an understatement. You write 3rd person well as Shadow of the Phoenix shows but your 1st person is something too. I must say that I am very glad that you have left your stories up. I would have missed some very good writing if you didn't. Well, there is more I can say but it would just end up repetitive if I did. So I'll just say thank you for writing a great story even if it is a side one at that.

Christ. I wondered when I read SotP whether Yugi had been raped, but I wasn't sure. So when I saw in your AN that there was a side chapte describing what had happened I came straight here. Holy Merlin. Poor Yugi. I can't wait till Harry fucks Atem up. I hope it will be beautiful.

-night flame miko

I read the other story, and I have this to say Yami. Is. A. Jerk! He needs to DIE! But this is good.

*low whistle* Yep, I was right about the rape.

Nicely written though. Aft!Yami is something I don't deal with much, 'specially since I mostly stopped reading Yugioh fanfic.

Keep writing!

god yami is such an arsehole!

can yugi grow a backbone and kill him now?

THAT would be fun to read!

good story

Let me at him. Let me at idiot actually did that to him. What an idiot. That heavy burden was not light. Oh and Anzu, *gr* I say we let Harry deal with the both of them. He knows so much about pain and suffering it is so not funny.

I think we should kill Atem. Hold him down, cut it off, shove it down his throat and watch him bleed to death *cough* *shifty eyes* Okay now that thats out there - that was really good, highly disturbing but good. Poor Yugi, at least he has Harry now.

That was... yea. Hn. I don't think that he would really ever do that... but he is (was, in this case) 1/2 of the King of Games. So he has to be good at controlling his emotions, no? I feel sorry for Yugi. And after reading this, I just hope that you can make his life hell. If not, let Harry take care of it! :D