*laughs so much and loses air and dies*...*gets up and remembers she has alot more fanfic to read* Hehe. Sorry for my lame attempts at humor. Anyway, this was hillarious, impossible and creepy, all the thigns I like abot comedy! PLEASE CONTINUE IT! I liked the part where Gary and Misty fought over Ash. Could you make a PalletxPokeshipping story? Please PM me if you do!

OK then. That was...Diserbing, but still good fic.

misty and gary are my favorite charaters (pouts) garys not gay tracy and brock are any way funny fic

the REALqueen of comdey spunky little eevee

backs away very slowly ok, this made me laugh,but only because...er...well...it made me laugh,lets just stick with that...

The only part about that I liekd was the last paragraph. The MIme part was hilarious. You can't shut the colorful bastard up. Hehehehhe.

that was scary...and it's even scarier that it was funny...

GREAT

::holds chest:: hilarious!

Best Poke-fic EVER.

That was very twisted and funny!

That's a pretty messed up fan fic but um.. it makes alot of sense... now...um.. where did Ash & Gary run off to

::gets up from the floor, trying to stop laughing:: Oh my gawd.. hilarious! "I'm sleeping with my half-uncle?" ::collapses into giggles again:: Too funny! And I see I'm not the ONLY ONE who NOTICED that POKEMON usually capitalizes totally RANDOM words! Eh.. or the game does anyway. ;; Heh heh..

damn...that was funny ...hehe, ash and gary..i love gary and the line from brock "i *knew* there was a reason why i didn't like her" Dude..**** outta *****

Oh good God! Ahahahahahahahaha! So funny! Ahahahahahahahaha!

You need help. Proffesional help.