*cackle*

Oh, this is a great read.

The back and forth dialogues and short lines is a good style match up for this fic--I really felt Roy's growing fidgetyness and general 'omgrizaandbaby!' track of thought. :)

*nodding* roy will be much much much more pestering father than hughes, if he married riza!!

This is just too good! I keep reading and rereading and I love it.

*laughs* Oh, that's just adorable :D

Really well done. I know you think that this is a bit out of character but reflecting on Roy's behavior in the past, I wouldn't necessarily say so. It's a bit hard to tell if this is based off the manga or anime, but in the manga when it comes to Riza we've seen him act very childish, silly, and extremely protective (He tried to torch Barry the Chopper for hugging her). In particular though he is being a 'pestering father', he's still doing in a (rather comically) serious way. Well done.

Aw, it's a cute story. I like it.

That's adorable. I can totally see this happening!

That was so adorable! Haha, you'd think something like that would be completely out-of-character and to my distaste, but it was just too cute. Awesome.

ha so true i think i'd go mad and i pity any boy who decides to go for their daughter the poor girl if she likes him too sigh how amazing to have parents like that though nicely done keep it up

LoL! this was fun! Ahahahaha! *i always knew he'd be more annoying than Hughes! LOL*

aw that was sweet lol i love how roy was all rambling lol

That was cute! I loved it!

Cute fic. I can actually picture Roy being as obsessed as Hughes with his family, especially if they end up having a little girl. Good job on this story. :)

Hahas! This is so sweet! Definitely a real treat for the readers! :DD

Aw, cute story! Great job on the dialogue - it's short, to the point, and completely conveys the mood and plot. I love it! :)

Hyousetsu