 Sasuke Uzumaki 83 11/21/10 . chapter 2OH MY GOd! I CRIED! YOU MADE ME CRY! D': |
 Sasuke Uzumaki 83 11/21/10 . chapter 1THAT Was AMAZING MEW!
You're awesome at writing!
;3 |
 joe 3/2/10 . chapter 1 ((Sasuke blushed only on rare occasions. Naruto himself had never seen him blush before ))_This is wrong. You had Naruto see Sasuke blush at least a couple of times at the dinner earlier in the week.
OK story_thanks for sharing. |
 just a girl two 9/16/09 . chapter 2omg omg omg ahahhahhahi need the to know the out come
i'm begging you here more plz...XC i have to know |
 just a girl two 9/16/09 . chapter 1Aw to cute for words...X3 |
 KittyBlue 7/25/09 . chapter 2Aw.. sad.. update soon please? :( XD |
 May Wong 7/6/09 . chapter 1Err so do you plan on writing a thir chapter or something?
But I did review on the second one... err... strange :x whatever |
 May Wong 7/6/09 . chapter 2Hey! I would like to know where this is going. Looking forward to the next chaper |
 winterkaguya 7/5/09 . chapter 2So sad...I guess now Sasuke understand how important Naruto is in his life, ne? I think guilt and regret is all what Sasuke is feeling right now...
Nice...I wonder what will happen next?
Update soon yah |
 setokaiba22692 7/3/09 . chapter 2Aww...it's such a good and angsty story so far! I think you did a good job at explaining how the car accident went. |
 edenforest1 7/2/09 . chapter 2omg that was so sad! i cried so much! T.T i hope everythings gonna be alright! ;( |
 Akira Nishikawa 7/2/09 . chapter 2My heart is in pain
What can I say...
You surprise me with this chappie why did Sasuke ran? I wonder... and accident ? poor Naru-Chan...I don't like people in love feel pain, but i guess real love comes with pain too. you can't change that.
Like it so far, even the end of it.
Go on !
kiss
Akira |
 miss-abarai 6/23/09 . chapter 2OMG. during the dinner scene I was trying not to laugh. For some odd reason that was the fricken hilarious thing of the day. Is there anyone else in that restaurant? idk if I saw to dudes randomly making out across the room I'd have to scream something.
"Get A Room!" or "HOLY SHIT YAOI!" something along those lines.
I was about to cry when Naruto got hit but then Sasuke yelled at the sky... it to cliche for me. But sad none the less. Narutos not gonna die is he? I hope to Allah not or I will like, wither.
Great writing as ever! You Rock my Socks! |
 yoko.25 6/20/09 . chapter 2so saddening! I'm about to cry...
It was really cute and everything...u...
poor sasuke T-T
Well I think you wrote it good..but sometimes writters have the idea but in papers seem ...um... what was the word? clumsy? poor? whatever..
In the end it was really good...excellent...
See ya till next chapter JA NE! |
 KoTenshi 6/20/09 . chapter 2God its so sad but i really like your story |