WoW... you have made me fall in love with this fic... I can't voice how awesome this fic is!! All that comes to mind is WoW...

GAH! The chibiness at the end, OH TEH CHIBINESS AT THE MOTHERFUDGING END! I... Can't... Stop... Reading...
Yours truly, a sevearly addicted, Kitten630

Loved it. ^_^

I've only just finished reading the first chapter of this and I have a long way to go before I finish the whole thing, but before I continue, I just wanted to say one thing.

I've been a member of for almost ten years now. I've read countless stories, in many different categories - some good, some horrific, and the occasion shining gem. lol I know this doesn't make me an official but what the hey, just wanted you to know that.

In all that time, I have never, ever, come across a story that has pulled me in the way yours did in the first four paragraphs. Paragraphs describing an original character no less. You have a great writer's voice, and it's obvious, just from those first four paragraphs, that you are far from a bad writer. Very far indeed.

I'm keyed up to read the rest. This story looks to be that rarest of all rares... one with both an engaging plot and a competent author.

Thank you.

dont be surprised you got over 250 reviews, this storys a winner dude, it had me thrilled right to the end :)
also, thanks for the shout-out, its nice to acknowledge those that make you *famous*

wow, I cant wait to finish this fic now. Everythings starting to come together and I'm sure the finale will be epic. Thanks for such a great read.

That was really good and so funny, it really had me laughing my tail off at times. (Especially Mikey annoying the crap out of the people guarding him when he was captured by Hun. I really hope that you will write another Raphcentered fic. I'll be one of the first in line to read it!

Ya know at some point the guys have to learn to listen to Cameron. I mean seriously, the first time Cameron said he had a bad feeling about something, Raph ignored him and ended up getting shot and chained up then Donnie blows Cameron off and gets captured by Bishop. It's sad that the kid has better ninja instincts than the actual ninja. Go figure lol.

No! Donatello!?! Cameron get up, now!
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Just an excerpt of what I almost said aloud on the train last night! I love Billy's reactions to all the different menacing figured that confront him in this chap. He's a funny kid :)

Ditto with the scared shitless purple dragon kid. Yay splinter btw.

Bah, not much story left... do I dare delve into your back catalogue :-|

No Raph! Survival before honour dagnabbit!!

Great chap, I am literally on the edge of seat (probably not the best place to be though, my seat slopes slightly at the front and I could fall at any second)

Hey, great couple of chaps, I really feel for everyone but Johanna in this story, is she based on someone you know? If so, I'll cancel any trips to NY I EVER want to take heh
If I wasn't writing this review I'd be reading more :)

WOW! I am so honored to be mentioned like this! Thank you!
I really liked the ending. It was nice to see things starting to wrap up. Question is now, though, what happens to the brothers from here? Juan's set for life. He's got a new girlfriend, his ma's got her meds...IS he still willing to meet up with Billy after all this chaos? Are him and Billy still tight? Will Raph ever see Cameron again after all this? Will they keep in touch? And, sorry for being curious, but what about Joanna? Hm. So many things left unanswered. But then...I'm always asking these kinda questions. The ones no one else are interested in.
Oh, and props for the 'splinter isn't getting any younger' nod. In the comic books, he dies of old age. More research on my part. When I am interested in something I go in full throttle. Head first and single minded. Until I have every last drop of information I can glean from every viable source I will not rest.
Sop yeah. That's me. I'm obsessive. And now I am obsessive about you. WRITE MIORE! :P
Sorry, couldn't resist. I'm just playing. (hides rope and gag)

sqUEl!
I. So. Love. Juan. YAYZ!
Erm,.,,for some reason I get the distinct impression that neither Casey nor April are married. Why is that? They got married in the last episode of the series. Hm.
And yes. You are definitely under the mistaken impression that Raph is older then Don. Me, personally I always hoped he was the second youngest. It would make his character that more interesting. Lucky me when I first found out my hope was real. Yayz!
Oh, this sure rounds things up nicely. I wonder where Bishop'll wind up...
Kinda feel bad for Hun, in a way. But...don't you think he'd be a little smarter then ta leave two cases of money laying around like that? Idiots. The lot of them.
hm.

YAY! For Raph! YAY! For Cameron! YAY! For Juan! SUPER YAYS!! ALL AROUND! Oh, Raphie, we love you. That is just ~so~ like Raph to jump out last minute and everything. It totally reminds me of the first episode when they went topside and Raph got trapped in that truck! Mikey teasing Raph and then him tackling Mike the moment the dcoor is opened! Perfect. Those two are the closest to each other, for sure. But what can you say, they are the two youngest. I did some research on the turtles a while back and it's official word from the creator of the turtles. I think in an earlier chapter you mentioned Don as being the second youngest, right?
Anyway.That part with Cameron is just too sweet! Little Cameron, so traumatized by life, yet so ready to speak up for his friend! YAYZ!
And now, the best part. JUANS GOT A GI(RLFRIEND! That is just so sweetw and awesome! I love this story, it's got it's own little subplots whirling around in the dark! I am now so wanting to know where this goe4s, for sure! What's Serena's story!? Where do they go from here!? She has to know that leaving a gang isn't that easy. And for sure she has her own tat!
Ok, ok. Enough questions. ON TO THE NEXT CHAPIE!

Oh. Wow. That is...that is...amazing! Splinter! His battle! On par! The guys. The rescue. And Cameron! YAY! for Cameron!
Wow. I loved this chapter. So much excitment. So much...energy! Splinter is a true master of the art, but even a master can be overwhelmed at times. Especially when it's a buncha brazen teenagers with little to no conscience, and he aims to KO, not kill.
*sigh*
I totally loved the inclusion of Cameron. So awesome The way he just appeared! ANd poor Billy. Poor, poor already freaked out Billy. I would say more, but I am being rushed off, so I will go. Byebye.