   SelfcreatedCharacter 5/18/12 . chapter 1Kyaaaa! Luffy! So cool! Moe! He's a Marine and he released Law! Smoker hanging with him! Why is he only a commodore? This is the same as why they didn't raise his bounty for what he done. He should have been higher Sengoku and Garp leave him to do what he wants. Zoro's not together with him? :[ Why? Coby! What about sourpuss Hevjdkdkcfn- Morgan's son. |
| shadowmarialove 4/7/12 . chapter 1 continue the story! |
| sunnyD 3/25/12 . chapter 1 Heehee, I wonder what Luffy was doing to Smoker at the very end. (Probably poking him, but since you didn't specify, much is left to the imagination.) This LuffyxSmoker friendship is written very well, very cute. And I agree with the moral of the story. Luffy is just that type of person. |
| Stalker Of Reactions 3/20/12 . chapter 1 Cool, it's a very interesting idea and definitely extremely fun to read. Luffy really will never change... Because he's Luffy |
| Gusto Gismondi 3/16/12 . chapter 1 I loved it. It was funny, well written and full of action. :-) |
| Nekoi Kurona 2/12/12 . chapter 1 Oh Oda, that was so awesome! I love it and how Luffy will always be Luffy Marine or not, I love him! |
| lilyoftheval5 11/21/11 . chapter 1 Cute! |
| ensis013 7/22/11 . chapter 1 This is so sweet! I have never read a Smoker/Luffy before and I have to say that I'm hooked onto the pairing. And I truly agree with the moral of your story! Luffy is just the kind of person who will have ever-lasting friends! Yay! A mer-boy one! I'll be looking forward and waiting patiently for the next AU. :D |
| PoisonAndSugar 6/9/11 . chapter 1 Am I seeing faint undertones of some slashy love going on between Smoker and Luffy here? 3
LOL, but maybe that's just because I see slash everywhere. It's taken over my brain.
Awesome story! |
| AlexTheGoth 4/26/11 . chapter 1 Awesome, enough said. |
| xxxTalia-Chanxxx 4/22/11 . chapter 1 Yay! Marine Luffy is the best, especially when his personality isn't changed. |
| AzerBlazer 4/13/11 . chapter 1 this is so great! Aww, the bromance between Smoker and Luffy is awesome. I can just imagine how Ace and Luffy hang out, all sneaky like.
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On second thought probably not sneaky at all. |
| Evil E. Evil 4/7/11 . chapter 1 like |
| Guard-y nut 3/19/11 . chapter 1 So amasing! Just one question though, what about Nami and the others? Does Luffy just happen to save them as he goes? |
| starkmaddness 2/2/11 . chapter 1 A really interesting take on how Luffy would have ended up being a marine. And it ended up that Luffy is Luffy is Luffy is Luffy. XD
Great oneshot with wonderful character interaction. Loved the bits of SmokeyxLuffy that were there :3
Thank you for writing! (I'm going to have to check out that Merboy!Luffy fic too hehe!) |
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